June 19, 2009 Marybeth

cheese2hqIf you are hear from the Blog Party…WELCOME! Take a moment to look around! Do you like my new digs? If you are not from the Blog Party, you should go visit! They have chocolate and coffee and cheese….I like cheese!

I worked more on my revisions yesterday and am SO happy with what I have done. I have to say that the first sentence of my book is by far my favorite sentence in the whole book. Wanna hear it? (Um that was a rhetorical question…duh!)

” The most devastating moment I can recall would have to be the moment I realized I was dead.”

I love it!!! Tell me what you think. Well I will get back to work next Monday on further revisions. I have completed all of Chapter 1 and half of Chapter 2. Only 25 more to go! I hope you all have a great weekend and I look forward to provide some more insight and updates next week.

Also, for great advice as to what to do for meals the day before you go grocery shopping visit Desperately Searching for My Inner Mary Poppins!

Comments (5)

  1. I’m from the blog party! I know it is almost over but I guess you could say I’m fashionably late (Either that or I’m here to clean up all the pizza boxes). I love your site and the other one about mary poppins too. Keep up the good work.

  2. Thanks for visiting girls! I love seeing new faces here. I can’t wait till I have more exciting news to share…um ya know…like getting “The Call”!

    Glad you like my website. Hooray for web designer husbands 😀

  3. I LOVE Mary Poppins! If I wasn’t afraid of sounding like I’m trying be cool and then falling way short, I’d say I {heart} Mary Poppins. 🙂

    Seriously, how could I – a girl named Mary – NOT love a movie that includes the song, “It’s a Jolly Holiday with Mary”?!?

    Anyway. I’m working on giving up perfect, because like our favorite Julie Andrews character, I tend to believe I’m practically perfect in every way. Until the next disaster happens!

    Thank you for stopping by my blog. Glad to meet you!

  4. I’m not from the Blog Party but your website is really pretty. All of the colors go together perfectly.

    I wish you luck in revising and that is a great first sentence. It certainly would hook me in!

    Have a great day and enjoy your weekend,

    ~Raven

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